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aesthetically

petalito

Senior Member
Colombia - Spanish
I am giving an opinion about a website. I am not sure about the word aesthetically in this paragraph. If you come across with some other suggestions please feel free to make them.

In my opinion links are an issue in this page, there are too many loosen links, those are not into categories, making it hard for a visitor to find a specific one. My suggestion would be to grouped links into categories, that way visitors can navegate it better. It would give a more organized look that would be aesthetically more attractive.
Hi.

The usual term is "more aesethetically pleasing". In your case, the word aesthetically is very much redundant, although I don't believe it to be incorrect.

I'm not sure if we're permitted to make remarks on other parts of a text on this particular forum (if not, I apologise):

In my opinion links are an issue on this page, there are too many loosen links, these are not organised/arranged into categories, making it hard for a visitor to find a specific one. My suggestion would be to grouped links into categories, that way visitors can navigate it better. It would give a more organized look that would be aesthetically more attractive.
I'm not sure if it's too late for any more suggestions, but your first sentence has comma splice errors.

I see that you are trying to list the items. Try rephrasing it like so (note the parallelism, which is preferred, especially when you list more than two things, but is not necessary for correct grammar):

In my opinion, links are an issue on this page. There is an overabundance of loose links and a lack of organization into categories. This makes it hard for a visitor to find a specific link. My suggestion would be to group links into categories for better navigation.
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