Hi,
I'm writing about a company that was ordered to suspend its operations:
(...) The decision followed an audit which identified violations of maximum oil and lubricant releases from the plant, excessive emissions to the atmosphere, and failure to submit required monitoring reports.
I don't know what exactly was emitted to the atmosphere. Does the part in bold look strangely vague?
I'm writing about a company that was ordered to suspend its operations:
(...) The decision followed an audit which identified violations of maximum oil and lubricant releases from the plant, excessive emissions to the atmosphere, and failure to submit required monitoring reports.
I don't know what exactly was emitted to the atmosphere. Does the part in bold look strangely vague?
