TRENT O'BRIEN
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Cantonese
Hi, recently I came across this sentence:
So what do you think? I’d really appreciate it if you could help me out with this.
Can we change this sentence into a gerund clause as follows:James finally got into his dream college, and he was looking forward to the first day ritual.
I don’t think these two actions (entering school/looking forward to something) happen at the same time, nor do I believe the semantic association between the two fulfils the requirement for such a construct, though grammatically it seems fine.James finally got into his dream college, looking forward to the first day ritual.
So what do you think? I’d really appreciate it if you could help me out with this.
