PHart
Senior Member
English - United States
Does this verse of my poem flow better with or without the 'much' in 'much too hesitant'? Thanks in advance.
'…an unfair judge, insufficient in my own view, unfaithful to my own values, ashamed of my false virtue, often guilty, seldom wise, much too hesitant, and downright clueless.'
'…an unfair judge, insufficient in my own view, unfaithful to my own values, ashamed of my false virtue, often guilty, seldom wise, much too hesitant, and downright clueless.'
