proofreading.

The writing below is from my student. I revised some, but I'm worried if there are any mistakes because I'm not a native.

Please, let me know if there are any grammatical mistake or any unnatural expressions that you don't use. Thanks a million in advance.


My name is ____________.
I am 15 years old and live in Seoul, Korea.
My favorite time of the day is the evening because I feel relaxed and I can do what I want after school.
In the evening, I enjoy playing the violin and it is my favorite activity.
I am happiest when I practice the violin.
My violin tutor visits my house and gives me a lesson twice a week.
Sometimes, I record my performance and put it on my facebook.
I am proud of myself when both my friends and my tutor watch and praise me a lot.

Sorry, Jeongmin. This Forum does not deal with proofreading; it deals with specific questions. If there is a word or construction that you are concerned about and with to discuss, you should tell us what it is.

natkretep said:

Sorry, Jeongmin. This Forum does not deal with proofreading; it deals with specific questions. If there is a word or construction that you are concerned about and with to discuss, you should tell us what it is.

I see ^_^ thank you for your kind answer.